In his dream
He walks
With the sun warm on his back
Along a deserted soft pebble beach
Where the Mediterranean
Caresses the small stones
To the music of his soul
When he awakes
The snow is gusting
In the bitter north-easterly
He finds the kettle
For the warmth he craves
In his dream
Papillons float gently
Embracing the fragrance
Of the fuschia-coloured flowers
Whose name he has long forgotten
Indifferent to all
Except the murmur of the bees
Which is music to his soul
When he awakes
The clouds rest on the roof-tops
The snowflakes swoop
Like demented butterflies
Before driving determinedly
Westward
In his dream
The aeroplane rises lazily
Through the grey thickness
Seeking and finding
The only thing
That can halt its progress
When he awakes
He walks
With the sun warm on his back
Along a deserted soft pebble beach
Where the Mediterranean
Caresses the small stones
To the music of his soul
Forever
Hauntingly beautiful like those dreams that linger long after the night is gone. Magnificently crafted. Bravo.
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Merci bien, Emmy, tu es encore trop gentille.
Mais, pour une fois, je ne suis pas mécontent.
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This is a magnificent offer from you today… love it…
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Thank you, Bulldog, AnElephant is moved by your words.
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She is awake
with windows closed
against the smell of septic.
She wishes she could
dream again. 😀
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Sometimes the dreams become the reality …….
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lol – sometimes. 🙂
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What a magnificent piece you’ve written. Attempting a rhyme with this would never do it justice. The difference between the dream and the stark reality is a brilliant convergence of realities. I applaud you on one of your best pieces to date.
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Thank you, your words warm AnElephant’s old cockles.
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Very well written! To me the airplane represents destiny of a sort, perhaps an unwilling one, created from a fear of not achieving a desirable goal. Quite a dichotomy, the beautiful warming shores of the Mediterranean and the bleak, bitter coldness of Scotland’s harsh weather. It appears that the plane (in the dream) is being set up in the greying skies to crash. Brilliant piece!
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AnElephant tries to avoid self-analysis, but can argue with nothing you say here.
Your praise is manna for the soul.
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This is my favorite one that you have written on here.
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Thank you for your kind words.
Unusually, AnElephant is quite pleased with it.
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