The Heist – Sunday Photo Fiction

 AnElephantCant wear a crown
His head is waaayyyy too big for that
He needs a team of volunteers
To hold back his ears
So that he can try on a new hat

This is a weekly invitation to write a short piece of fiction (c. 150 words) based on a photo prompt (below) provided by Alastair.
Follow the link to see a treasure trove of stories.
But please read AnElephant’s little jewel first.
Or perhaps you just want to sing along?
Bohemian Rhapsody, by Queen, anybody?

Copyright Al Forbes

Copyright Al Forbes

The Heist

Well, that was the greatest robbery in the history of the world!
You are a genius, no one else could have planned it so perfectly.
But I needed you, little brother, no one else can open vaults like you can.
Thanks, I am glad we got together again for this last job.
Well, I knew it was time to let bygones be bygones, I think you learned from your mistake.
Certainly did, will never open my mouth again!
I know that, little brother, I know that.
So is it time to divide this up with the rest of the gang?
I already took care of the guys.
So all of this is just between us? Just you and me, yeah!
Hmm, about that ….

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27 Responses to The Heist – Sunday Photo Fiction

  1. EagleAye says:

    Kablam! Somehow, it seems this ends with a gunshot, with a sound of thunder. Honor among thieves they say. This is very clever and very amusing. Well done!


  2. Jayde-Ashe says:

    Fantastic! I agree, it definitely has elements of The Joker in there. Nice touch that it is his brother, makes the betrayal even more shocking!


  3. JED says:

    Poor li’l bro. Us little brothers are always looking up and trusting big bro. Well done


  4. i love how you create pieces which right at the end you give a suggestion that all is not what it seems. Well done Sir Elephant, very impressive as always.


  5. Steve Lakey says:

    Just one more to take care of… Highly entertaining!


  6. nadig7 says:

    Honour among thieves 😛


  7. misskzebra says:

    If you’re going to be selfish and greedy, make sure you’re the most selfish and the greediest…


  8. Jem says:

    Honour among thieves and all that — nicely done


  9. acflory says:

    -grin- I’m trying to fit your words to the song but I just can’t!


  10. Al says:

    Haha excellent. “What’s yours is mine, and what’s mine’s my own” hhehe


  11. Anja says:

    Awwww brotherly love! Guess there was one more lesson to be learned.


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