AnElephantCant be nosey or cheeky
But he feels that today he must do a little digging
He asks a polite question
Does not expect a confession
But is Al getting paid commission by these flapping pigeons
This is a weekly invitation to write a short piece of fiction (c. 150 words) based on a photo prompt (below) provided by Alastair.
Follow the link to see a flock of super stories nesting in different parts of Al’s aviary.
But first of all please read this feather-brained effort by a land-bound Elephant.
Oh, and if anyone actually likes pigeons, please feel free to view:
http://anelephantcant.me/2012/07/07/my-granny-keeps-pigeons-7/
Bird Brain
She begs him not to go up on the roof, at least until the rain stops and the wind dies down.
But he apparently must, just must, fix the aerial before the match starts.
He scoffs at her concerns.
Does he really believe he can fly like those wretched pigeons that seem to be always around?
Heart in mouth, she hears him scrambling about overhead.
She loves him, and knows that he loves her, but he is an idiot!
She hears the crash and sees the hole appear in the ceiling as it cracks open under his weight.
When he struggles down a few minutes later, nursing a very sore leg, he is aghast to see the tile embedded in her skull.
The twist in the tale is awesome.
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My dear Sir Spinner, AnElephant apologises for not responding sooner to your very kind comment, but he just found it in Spam. This seems to happen randomly, no idea why. A belated thank you for your visit.
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You are welcome friend.
Some glitch in wp.
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As did this reply, which AnElephant has just seen.
Quite bizarre!
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enjoyed reading the comments as much as the story
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If Nightlake is happy, AnElephant is happy!
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Ack! Poor lady! I don’t know about you, but if the ceiling was cracking – I would not be standing underneath it! The ending took me by surprise!
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And her, AnElephant thinks!
Thank you for taking the time to visit and comment, much appreciated.
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Creepy ending, but a good one!
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But not for the lady!
Thank you.
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🙂
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Ha! Great ending. I wasn’t expecting her to have a tile in her skull. And neither was she! Nicely done.
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Thanks, Steve, any tale by AnElephant is a dangerous place to be!
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HAHA I did not expect that ending. Brilliant and funny as usual 🙂 Excellent. Thanks also for the link to paddling piddling pigeons 🙂
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Happy to amuse, mon ami.
And Pigeon poem is a riot with kids, can reduce schoolteachers to sobbing wrecks in minutes!
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hahahahaha I love that idea. You will have to tell Anja that 😉
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Anja knows about this trick he does…but he knows I am one of the teachers that would have joined it and caused more chaos. 🙂
Look what you two have done to me! Talking to AnElephant and Duck as reduced me to referring to myself in 3rd person. 😦
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and I am now adding another mark to the tally devious AnElephant……oh my.
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Ho hum, here’s my bum!
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Dear Sir Elephant now I see you are into killing ladies. Very well written and entertaining as always…..
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I am starting to wonder if he is trying to take us all out one by one…..think I need to hide.
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You could be onto something!!
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AnElephant takes Anja out any time!
He knows a lovely little peanut place not too far from here ….
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Where I might choke on a peanut and end up in one of your poems?
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If this was Facebook, I’d be liking this comment.
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I will considered it LIKED. I now like yours. 🙂
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AnElephant runs an equal opportunity blog!
Thank you, Sir ST2.
And go, Aussies!!!!
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We thrashed them..so good to see…..
you are a modern day man good Sir, EO is very admirable. I’m impressed, a modern up with it 21st C sort of guy…wow……I did underestimate you……now I shall bow to your superiority……well tonight at any rate.
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