AnElephantCant remember how many
Of anything it takes to change a light bulb
Because he ain’t too bright
So if you need some light
Stay well clear or he may accidentally squash you to pulp
This is a weekly invitation to write a short piece of fiction (c. 150 words) based on a photo prompt (below) provided by Alastair.
Follow the link to see a discotheque of stories shine a light on your best moves.
But please read AnElephant’s switched on submission first.
The Beads
She sits anxiously sipping tea in her neighbour’s front room.
The police are searching her home and garden again, this time much more thoroughly.
She has given them every detail of her daughter’s appearance.
Her hair and eye colour (blonde, blue), her height (3 feet 3 inches), the clothes and shoes she looked so pretty in, even the plastic birthday jewellery she was wearing for the first time.
Old Rob pats her hand sympathetically, supportively, he has been such a comfort for so long.
He was there to help when they moved in, there when Connie was born, five years ago yesterday, there as a shoulder to cry on when Steve left.
She smiles back gratefully, strained but sincere, and clears the dishes into the kitchen.
At the back door, reflected in the light bulb, lies a single pink bead.
Old Rob gives me the creeps.
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Clever story, that ties in well with the Photo Prompt.
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Cheers, Steve, glad you liked it.
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I wanted to share some awards with you, please take your pick!
http://utesmile.wordpress.com/2013/12/09/a-brand-new-award-and-many-more-%E2%99%A5/
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AnElephant is hugely flattered
By your response to his humble words
He says thank you Ute
You are really so cute
But he does not ever accept any awards
Thank you.
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Oops never mind, still you know I enjoy your blog!
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Oh, how horrid. Clever tale telling though. 🙂
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Ah yes, but sadly these things do happen.
Thank you for kind words.
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Very clever creation of the image that links to the prompt.
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Thank you, my lovely stripey friend.
Nice to be appreciated.
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Of course he was supportive. Helps to throw off suspicion. Very chilling tale and great story!
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Thank you for very kind words.
AnElephant glows.
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Wonderful tale with a twist in the tail. 🙂
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Very happy you enjoyed, thank you.
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Ohhhh you devious AnElephant (laughing as I love to hear)…very good. But I am still not sure I need to add a tally…..
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Time will tell.
Or not.
Thank you for your visit and comment.
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Sinister brilliance. I really like this piece, you’ve done a great job of creating the atmosphere.
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AnElephant blushes.
Thank you, Ms Nelson.
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The tale is well told.
Emmy is freaking.
Attention to details in the telling
Stopped my heart cold.
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Big ears flapping
AnElephant agrees
Calm down Emmy please
But bad things happen
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It took me a couple of reads to get that. I thought the bead was at her back door until I reread it and saw that she sits in the neighbour’s front room.
A very good chilling tale.
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C’mon, Al, not that many words to absorb!
Glad you enjoyed it.
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I did 😀
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I love this and I would like to invite you to my page…there is a link at the bottom of my last offering. A group project that is looking for more voices. One of the characters is named Elephant and I thought of you 🙂 I’m not involved but it just might be a perfect thing for AnElephant such as yourself…cheers 🙂
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Thank you for your visit and comment.
Happy you enjoyed.
Have visited as you suggested.
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😀
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