AnElephantCant go into space
But he thinks he likes to travel to Mars
He loves to gaze at the sky
Through AnElephant’s eye
And he dreams of flying to the twinkling shining stars
This is a weekly invitation to write a short piece of fiction (c. 150 words) based on a photo prompt (below) provided by Alastair.
Follow the link to see a gathering of galactic greatness.
But please first read AnElephant’s interplanetary idiocy.
The Hobby
He is only slightly surprised at the sound.
He thought he was alone but, of course, recognises her cough.
Thirty years of marriage means that you recognise every footstep, every laugh, every breath.
Happy years, mostly.
Sometimes difficult, financially and emotionally, sometimes wonderful.
Two children, raised and moved on.
Life is quieter now, and less fun.
Although he does get more time, and more peace, to indulge himself with all sorts of electronic gadgets – boys’ toys, as they are called.
It is a long time since they quarrelled, since she last sneered at his harmless hobby.
Since she disappeared forever.
He still misses her every day.
No trace was ever found of her.
He made sure of that.
So he is only slightly surprised at the sound.
Excellent writing.
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A whole new meaning to ‘ghost in the machine’. Loved the twist.
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AnElephant dances the cha cha here!
Thank you.
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I didn’t see that coming, great twist. I was thinking ‘Ahh, you old romantic you, then wham…’ 😉
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Your first visit, is it, Helen?
AnElephant always has a twist for his favourite reader!
Thanks for visiting again.
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Oookay… something tells me he has a lot of explaining to do. Then again, maybe she’ll never sneer at one of his hobbies again. Nice twist in the tale there Professor E. 😀
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She is not ever going to sneer at anything again, that is for sure!
Glad you enjoyed, AnElephant likes the twist in his little curly tail!
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At the end I went… What?
I want to know more. Very interested in where that sound came from. Well Done!
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Only he knows, don’t you think?
Glad you liked, and thanks for taking the time to come by and comment.
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Oh delicieux! Un frisson dans le dos….
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Ou Barjols up the bahookey!
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He is evidently a man who is hard to startle. I really like this story.
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Thanks, David, guess if you know the truth …..
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Excellent plot twist! Enjoyed this one 🙂
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Thank you, AnElephant is happy.
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Excellent 🙂 Definitely a reason for surprise 🙂
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