AnElephantCant stay in the city
He enjoys a ramble down a quiet country road
And returns to the killing
Because he finds it quite thrilling
And in recent weeks Anja’s death toll has slowed
This is a weekly invitation to write a short piece of fiction (c. 150 words) based on a photo prompt (below) provided by Alastair.
Just click on the link to saunter insouciantly through some sensational stories by sensible scribes.
But please first read AnElephant’s melodramatic motorway madness.
Crash
He is very depressed and in a foul mood when he swerves across the narrow road into the oncoming car, catapulting its passenger, a young American lady from North Carolina, through the windscreen to her death.
His wife has just told him she is leaving, moving to Paris with her boss to set up a new branch of their thriving agency.
His own small software business is struggling badly.
He is unsure if it can survive the latest cash flow crisis.
His only child, his brilliant and athletic son, has left university with severe drug problems, but still refuses treatment or, indeed, any help whatsoever.
And now his own health is failing due to the stress.
But he deliberately swerves across the narrow road into the oncoming car when the little boy with the red tricycle and the screaming mother emerges abruptly from the garden directly into his path.
Ahhhhh….I go away to a private island for a peaceful retreat and return to find out you have killed me once again! Hmmmmmm
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Well, if you are not careful you just waken up dead.
That is a real rule actually, not just AnElephant made up one.
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Excellent story again 🙂 Annnnnnd there she goes again. I wonder though, if she will return to haunt him. 🙂
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If she does, AnElephant just bumps off her ghost!
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😀
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Oh! I was not expecting the ending. At first, I thought about the family he destroyed by killing the young woman – thinking he was selfish. He was redeemed when the true story of his plight came into the light…well done!
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AnElephant is delighted that you followed his misdirection.
And please do not fret too much about the young lady, it is only Anja!
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Only? lol
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Yeah, well, you are kinda used to it!
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This one caught me off guard, whew! A great, if twisted read Sir Elephant.
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AnElephant is delighted to catch the lovely lady off guard.
He lives for a whew!
Thank you, Karin.
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Was not expecting that one! Good piece! ^..^
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Thank you, dear lady, happy you enjoyed.
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Poor Anja, poignant tricycle. Terrible toll of terror. By the way, I ran across a post Marlyn at Kintal dedicated to you at her site, and it did not appear you had seen it at all. No deaths were involved in that post.
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Thank you for your kindly supportive comments as always.
Can you tell me how to find Marlyn’s post please?
Thank you again.
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http://kintal.wordpress.com/2014/04/09/anelephant-cant/
Hugs, Elephant! Warmly, Brenda
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Thank you and mammoth hugs, sweet lady.
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Mammoth hugs are always appreciated. 🙂
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I am glad someone cares about me. 😦
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Nah, Brenda is just pretending to be nice. She is an evil sorceress in real life who just loves to see dead Anjas littering the roadside!
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Yes, I do. It’s a good thing AnElephant is on another continent! LOL
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A very good thing!
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Oh, I hope you saw I caught up on the Fairy Tale Prompts. 🙂
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I just got back from a yoga retreat and trying to do catch up 🙂
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Ah, that sounds like a delight! Take your time. Fairy tales should not be rushed. LOL Hugs, Brenda
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AnElephant thinks if he serves coffee or haggis scones he gets rich from all these pretty ladies sitting around nattering!
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Haggis scones!?! You’re making that up! Ugh! LOL Blueberry, yes, lemon, delish, but haggis?!? Ack!
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Brilliantly twisted.
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Thank you, sir.
Have you sussed the book yet?
AnElephant chortles.
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Whoah!
Ok. I caught my breath again.
Good read Monsieur UnElephant!
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Merci, cherie.
UnElephant est bien content maintenant.
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