AnElephantCant climb a lighthouse
He bewares of wee twisty stairs
He knows nobody cares
About his scary nightmares
But where oh where can he hide from the bears
This is a weekly invitation to write a short piece of fiction (c. 150 words) based on a photo prompt (below) provided by Alastair.
Just click on the link to see some shining literary beacons in response to this week’s excellent prompt.
But please first cast an eye over AnElephant’s obscure outpouring, as he seeks a light in the darkness.
Forbidden Jetty
I am sitting at the end of the forbidden jetty watching the sunset over the islands.
Darkness is falling when I hear voices behind me.
Access to this isolated spot is not allowed.
I come here for the solitude.
I am not the nervous type.
But I am not happy to see three large shapes moving towards me with a distinct air of menace.
I rise and walk towards them.
There is nowhere else to go.
A smaller shape appears behind them, says something.
They pause, move aside.
I see that she is a girl, maybe sixteen years old, much younger than her companions.
She is quite lovely, smiles enchantingly, wishes me a good evening.
I grin back, return her greeting.
As I pass them she speaks two words.
Take him.
It’s often the ones you don’t suspect. Good story with an excellent twist at the end, Elephant. I really wasn’t expecting that. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you, Suzanne, good to see you here again.
Happy you enjoyed it.
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So much for forbidden solitude.
Ellespeth
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Trespassers will be executed!
And welcome to AnElephant’s zoo, dear lady.
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Where have all the nice girls gone?
DJ
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Gone to jetties, every one
When will we ever learn?
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Eeek! This reminds me of Taken, the movie.
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Surely not, dear Brenda, AnElephant’s recollection of that film is that the lovely Mr Neeson kills just about everyone in Paris!
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Yes, but something about the last two words, “Take him” just made me think of kidnapping and that movie. Call me crazy, but that was what popped into my mind.
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Call you crazy, dear Brenda? AnElephant is not so brave!
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LOL
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That’s a great sudden turn of mood, Elephant. You do that very well. Never trust those young girls. Killers, every one.
-David
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Thank you, David, but aren’t you just a bit on the harsh side there!
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Possibly. 🙂
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I agree with Steve…they can be deceptive
Great story!
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Thank you, Francesca, happy you enjoyed.
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Maybe she found her true love and she doesn’t want him to get away. Afterall, it’s the day after Valentine’s Day. 😀
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Yeah, maybe.
Let’s go with that dream, Joy!
Thanks for taking the time to comment, dear lady.
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2 words…..I’m intrigued
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Good to see you here, Bon.
Think the narrator is in trouble, hmm?
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Rule # 1 ..trust no one!
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Hey, AnElephant thinks that is a tad cynical!
But thank you for your comment.
AnElephant is all depressed now!
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desole…. 🙂
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Je crois pas, ma belle femme, mais tu es toujours la bienvenue ici.
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Appearances can be deceptive! 🙂
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Oh so true, Steve.
Thanks for visiting.
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