you have always been so good to me
you are beautiful and kind
but your eyes no longer shine with joy
and I sadly am not blind
we both know that you don’t love me
I’m now not sure you ever did
any feelings you have left for me
are sadly too well hid
why can’t you tell me that it’s over
why not just once speak the truth please
free me from this misery
before my heart breaks into pieces
your smile has long since disappeared
I can’t remember your last touch
I miss your laughter every day
I love you angel far too much
Beautiful and sad both. Very nice!
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Thank you, Joy, AnElephant is happy that his poem touched you.
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Si l’autre ne vous aime plus il faut partir. Pourquoi rester et souffrir ? Est-ce une vocation ?
If the other one don’t likes you more than you have to leave. Why stay and suffer? Is it a vocation? Great poem my friend 🙂
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Merci, Gys, mais quelque fois la vie n’est pas aussi simple.
On doit rester, n’est-ce pas?
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Non parfois il faut savoir partir. A quoi cela sert il de rester si personne ne t’aime ? bisous Brian 🙂
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Dear Elephant, This story is so perfectly told! You are amazing, and I love this sad story! I hope they can part friends. Nan
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AnElephant thinks lovely Nan is the sweetest lady in the jungle.
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Boy oh boy Elephant, this made me very wistful since I’ve been that elephant myself many, many times. It’s always best, if you truly feel this is correct, to pack your trunk and leave. If you’re wrong, they’ll come find you, if not, so much better off in the long run because at the end of all those tears is always a rainbow filled with peanuts 🙂
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AnElephant spends 2 days looking for this rainbow.
But still no peanuts.
Sad Elephant, Susannah tells fibs.
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Elephant needs to be patient.
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‘ I sadly am not blind’
A powerful and painful statement.
AnElephantCan make me cry on Saturdays.
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Tristement, UnElephant n’est pas un jolly mouchoir.
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Tu as changĂ© d’adjectif!?
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UnElephant ne sait que deux adjectifs.
Et l’autre il ne sait pas ecrire en Francais.
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