AnElephantCant play board games
He can never win at Chess or Monopoly
It just is not fair
When he plays Solitaire
He does not finish in the top three because he plays so sloppily
This is a weekly invitation to write a short piece of fiction (c. 150 words) based on a photo prompt (below) provided by Alastair.
Just click on the link to see some skilful story-tellers Scrabble for success in response to this week’s excellent prompt.
But please first cast an eye over AnElephant’s Ludo-crous* effort, he does not have a Clue, don’t you know!
*AnElephant understands that in North America Ludo is known as Parcheesi. Which clearly does not work quite so well in his excruciating pun.
The Parting
She has never looked more beautiful.
I love her more than anyone, anything, on earth.
And my heart is breaking, because she is leaving.
I guess I always knew she would, she is so young, so alive.
At least she has the courage to tell me to my face, not wait until I hear from others.
I love him, she says, I have to go.
I don’t argue.
I know it is futile.
And, deep down, I only care about her happiness.
I try not to think about the lonely years of solitaire stretching ahead.
You will always be in my heart, I tell her, and if you ever need me …
I run out of words.
Her eyes moisten.
I help her out of the taxi, watch her smooth her perfect dress.
She kisses my cheek.
Thank you, Daddy.
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Love the witty antics before the poem… but that poem! Wow, so beautifully written and an endearing ending! (Sorry I am so late making it to your words!)
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Thank you, Lori, AnElephant is very happy you enjoy his mixed bag.
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You are most welcome 🙂 I enjoyed so much, I just had to share! Have an awesome day!
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Comments like this make writing worthwhile.
You have made my day, and probably my week.
Thank you.
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*beams* you are most welcome! I am glad I could brighten your day (and week!) Cheers!
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So bittersweet. I seem to be going through that now with my oldest just graduating HS> He will soon be leaving for the university. I’m so not ready.
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Thanks, RoSy, and sorry I missed your bittersweet comment before.
You, and he, will be just fine.
Believe.
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“I try not to think about the lonely years of solitaire stretching ahead.”
I knew form this line it was his daughter. Although with you, you can’t be sure. It could have been someone you had locked up in the basement.
I’m glad it was this way. It made me smile a sad smile.
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Actually, Dawn, this is all a ruse.
The bridegroom is in the basement!
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Dammit! I knew it! 😉
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Beautiful.
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Thank you again, my dear friend, always so generous with your praise.
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I can’t help it, you write so well.
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Surprising ending. I’d say you have a talent there!
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AnElephant lives in hope!
Thank you.
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Like emmylgant wrote, you are the master of misdirection.
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Thank you, but please don’t agree with Emmy, she gets all uppity!
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Bittersweet.
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Life can be.
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Ah the master of misdirection strikes again with a moving, ever so gentle, if painful, way of letting go. The last line…
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Chortle, chortle.
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fantastic ending, not expected.
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Glad you enjoyed, and liked the surprise.
Bet you didn’t expect this, either!
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fantastic ending, not predictable at all.
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Glad you enjoyed, and liked the surprise.
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The last line is a perfect ending to a poem about loss and “moving on.” Very well crafted!
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You are too kind, thank you.
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Oh the heartbreak of letting go…. beautiful!
By the way, I just noticed you have an ebook… which is waiting for me on my kindle cloud to read… 😀
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Thank you again, Dale.
Feedback on ebook eagerly awaited.
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As soon as I finish this month’s selection!
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I tired to guess the twist and guessed wrongly. You win again! 😉
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AnElephant has a twisty tail/tale!
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Bravo!
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This story is beautiful! And, the last line was it’s crowning glory! Wonderful AnElephant!
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Thank you, Joy.
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