Click here to hear the poem read aloud:
my sorrow widens like a river in torment
as it flows under a bridge of my tears
and sighs like the wind in the darkness
dispensing the seeds of my fears
deep waters crash upwards in confusion
dragged screaming in dread from the well
unmoving horses gallop like thunder
around the pain of the coloured carousel
the questions contaminate the interrupts
inhuman voices soon grow bolder
nervous faces flit from eye to eye
finding chaos at last in the order
the writer lies sleepless in anguish
staring up through the nightmare above
the poetry that crawls from my heartache
is written in the blood of our love
I’m experiencing the chills of a tormented heartbreak.
This is a masterful piece of writing. I’m awestruck.
Thank you for sharing your expert skill.
Isadora 😎
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Once more AnElephant is charmed by Isadora’s sweet words.
Heartbreak, sadly, comes to many.
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Indeed, it does.
Thank you for the kind compliment. 😎
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Dear Elephant,
Magnificently heartbreaking. I need to go to my happy spot after that one. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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AnElephant is sad that his lady requires solace.
He recommends this as a happy place, if not a happy poem:
https://anelephantcant.me/2014/05/03/broken-steps/
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I don’t know how you do it; but you do it so well. As Anja says, painfully beautiful
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It ain’t what AnElephant do, it’s the way that he do it,
That’s what gets results
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Painfully beautiful.
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AnElephant bites his tongue.
Thank you, sweet Anja.
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Nice poem! Eloquently expresses the dillema of a poet.
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Dilemmas are so much a part of life, don’t you think?
Thank you for your visit, and for taking the time to comment.
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Agreed. It’s a pleasure to read.🌸
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