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In My Dream
in my dream
I walk
with the sun warm on my back
along a deserted soft pebble beach
where the Mediterranean
caresses the small stones
to the music of my soul
when I awake
the snow is gusting
in the bitter north-easterly
I find the kettle
for the warmth I crave
in my dream
papillons float gently
embracing the fragrance
of the fuschia-coloured flowers
whose name I have long forgotten
indifferent to all
except the murmur of the bees
which is music to my soul
when I awake
the clouds rest on the roof-tops
the snowflakes swoop
like demented butterflies
before driving determinedly
westward
in my dream
the aeroplane rises lazily
through the grey thickness
seeking and finding
the only thing
that finally
and abruptly
halts its progress
when I awake
I walk
with the sun warm on my back
along a deserted soft pebble beach
where the Mediterranean
caresses the small stones
to the music of my soul
forever
Beautiful, and the imagery is perfect
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I love when dreams become reality…. beautiful
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Loved this, the descriptions. You paint a picture of this calm beautiful Mediterranean beach and the cold bitterness of winter and snow. The last two stanzas change, Your speaker is confusing realitynand dreams I think. I get the picture the plane ride is actually reality, something happens and then forever your speaker is in the Mediterranean passed on. Nicely Done Elephant. Hugs
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Very glad you enjoyed this, Amanda, and your understanding and analysis is spot on.
Nicely done. Hugs
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Thanks Elephant. Enjoy your week. More hugs
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Words as fluid as waves touching the shore. How I love the way you weave your words into a picture perfect tale. 😍
Happy New Year 2017
May it be a year filled with joy, prosperity, good health and more love ❤️ than your heart can hold.
Isadora 😎
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Comments as warming as the Mediterranean sun. How AnElephant loves the way you create such compliments. You fill his heart with joy.
AnElephant wishes Isadora everything she wishes herself.
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😎
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Then again, maybe it is all a dream. This is beautifully written and carries me along the waves between dream and reality.
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A dream, a nightmare, and an afterlife reality.
AnElephant is happy sweet Anja enjoys.
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Dear Elephant,
You do have a knack for evocative verse. I felt the longing in this. Well done as always, my pink friend.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, m’lady.
Happy Hogmanay.
And may 2017 bring you more richly deserved success.
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